Monday, 14 May 2018

Sheena Cameron and Louise Dempsey Writing PD


Friday 29th September 2017

  • Shorter more frequent blocks of writing.
  • Many features of writing remain the same regardless of text type. Especially within the same fiction or non fiction types.ie: introduction, conclusion, variety of sentences etc.
  • Kids need to ‘Notice’ and analyse text in reading before writing.
  • Notice sentences in reading as exemplars for writing.
  • Read a sentence and clap the full stop. Get kids to notice the capital letters and full stops.
  • Type of text - what are the clues?
  • Notice sentence starters, punctuation, paragraphs, hooks, titles, sub titles.
  • Use text types in reading time to warm up students into reading.
  • Students in year 3 beyond should start looking at text structures. Once their writing starts to flow etc, from a 2b onwards, start looking at text structure and organisation.  Prior to this, students need to learn the biomechanics of writing.
  • Text analysis should be in reading time.
  • Students should write everyday.
  • Use 10 minute shared reading sessions to get kids familiar with text types they will be writing.
  • Students use these times to create a writers checklist and word list based on a range of exemplars
  • Spelling routines are important. Give students plenty of time to have a go and learn how to spell.
  • Students need to understand the reason for punctuation.
  • Good word choices are important
  • Editing = proofreading the re-crafting . Important to model how to edit and make improvements.
  • Give status to the idea of changing your writing and improving the language used. Crossing out a word and replacing it with a better one isn’t messy, it is being clever.
  • Modelled writing= I do
  • Shared and guided writing = we do
  • Independent writing= you do
  • Don’t underestimate the power of roaming and quick stops to remind or praise students in the moment
  • Mixed ability writing but pull children depending on abilities or needs.
  • Relevant and real
  • Stem from language experience or a known topic
  • Real audience and purpose
  • Bite sized chunks
  • Do something, view something, listen to something
  • Union of strength video-use of drama to help students organise the timeline of events in the story.


  • Ways to organise ideas
  • Discussion
  • List or notes
  • Criteria
  • Talking frames
  • Picture plans
  • Brainstorms
  • Symbols
  • T charts/ Y charts
  • Planning sheets

  • Planning needs to be carefully modelled and kids need to be taught how to plan.
  • When planning and writing - have students say their sentence, write their sentence, then check their sentence. This helps them to check their punctuation and sense.
  • Planning sheets: only use them occasionally. Don’t over do them. You need to teach them how to use the template. They need to have a purpose.  
  • Collaborative planning is best. You can share ideas and learn from others, Poppet app allows you to plan online and print the plan off.
  • Pallet is also a collaborative planning tool.
  • Post it notes are a great way to collaboratively plan and brainstorm.
  • Punctuation mime is cool for getting kids to think about the punctuation in a sentence.
  • Clear criteria that is visual, memorable and measurable

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